A paper plane for your crashed thoughts?

Pennies are too heavy

Would your heart lift and take wings if I put a price on it.

Unload this burden on me, like a feathered quill in the hands of a composer crafting his last symphony.

Lonely balconies hold secrets of days when the mind leaped over the rails a thousand times.

Mournful gaze sailing to the moody sunset.

The chaos of peace
And calm in turmoil.

I’ll extend a hand to you

as a testament to show I’m always here for you.

I promise not to say the right things,

I’ll just hug you tightly with the embrace of my beating heart

and these words from my pen and let you know that you’re not alone.

#Conundrum

15 responses to “Mind Trip.”

  1. floatinggold Avatar

    The poem, together with the photo is so relaxing and assuring. Well done.

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      Thank you.
      I appreciate the feedback.

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  2. bluerooster Avatar

    I like your promise not to say the right things.

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      Thank you .

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  3. Rosaliene Bacchus Avatar

    Thanks for the follow 🙂

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      You’re welcome.
      Thank you too

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  4. Warren Richards Avatar

    Nicely said!

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      Thanks.
      I appreciate the feedback.

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  5. Spiral Artist Avatar

    Awwwww, that was sweet! Heartwarming. But, it has to be said: “A paper plane for your crashed thoughts? / Pennies are too heavy” is just out of this world. Takes a moment to register, but when it does, it’s a slap on the face, especially with the way it leads with that. Well crafted.

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      I’m glad you noticed.
      Thanks for the feedback.

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  6. Jazzi Ryan Ranes Avatar
    Jazzi Ryan Ranes

    Your words sing with a surreal beauty. Love ths poem!

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      Thank you

      Like

  7. Ravindra Kumar Karnani Avatar

    Loved it.
    “I promise not to say the right things,
    I’ll just hug you tightly with the embrace of my beating heart”
    Keep writing, stay blessed!

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  8. Rulla Alani Avatar

    Wow! This was beautifully pieced together. I love the imagery!

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    1. Kamanda Koroma Avatar

      Thank you dear.

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